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Because I got so caught up
In my intricate choice of words
That I completely missed
The point I was making
So I started over
Subjugating my meaning
And once again, subdued
Because I got so caught up
In my intricate choice of words
That I completely missed
The point I was making
So I started over
Subjugating my meaning
And once again, subdued
:iconandsoshescreams:
"And oh! your awkward ways, your nature, and everything you say."

You know when you have something terribly brilliant storming in your brain, but all your words can do is screw it up? Well, that where my inspiration came from.
:iconnihility-and-forever:
Story of every poem I have ever written. ^^

The repetition illustrates how annoying the problem really is. Nice touch.
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:iconandsoshescreams:
Repitition makes an impression. Thank you.
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